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- Title of Full Paper:
Agents of Change: from Collection to Connection (Ref #311)
- Date:
- 19-02-2007 21:27:42
- Status:
- Accepted
- Rating:
- 10
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Reviewer Comments:
- Review #1 : Left on 05-03-2007 18:47:57 #
- This is a clearly written, easily read paper with a well articulated argument.
Suggested Conference Theme: Craft Intelligence / Collaborative Practice
Rating: 10
- Review #2 : Left on 15-03-2007 10:24:57 #
- There are some details needing attention:
References should be checked to remove redundancy ? eg ?Paul Greenhalgh (Greenhalgh 2007)...? And I don?t feel the ?in ? format is needed in in-text citations ? author and date is all you need to point to the full citation.
A more important problem is the reference to Donald Shon, citing a secondary source (Grey and Malins) for a quotation from Schon. Given Schon?s eminence and the large number of people who cite him, often with very little insight, you have to know his work for yourself or leave it alone. I would strongly recommend staying away from him as it is very easy to put a shallow interpretation on his work if you have not made a proper study of it.
Finally there is a statement under the heading ?motivation? that makes no sense to me: ?This, together with the limited enriching physical interactions to digital content in screen based art? and I suggest that it needs a rethink to clarify what is meant.
Suggested Parallel Track: Collaborative Practice
Rating: 9